Cold Weather

         COLD WEATHER
Cold weather outside
Thunder blaze the night sky
Can’t feel my fingers
Body is numb
Shivering as my teeth clatter
Freezing into ice
Snowflakes drifting from above
Like its Christmas time
No ice in the lake to skate in
Looking for a place to sleep in
So thirsty for coffee
So ravenous for food like hot toast
Still freezing


I was working really hard on by trying really hard to make my sentence making sense so that my reader can visualize and also that they were there and they want to read more.'


By: Leitoria Elaine Talataina

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